Tuesday 28 of February 2012
TODAY, WE KEPT ON WITH THE ROLLIPOLY (BACKWARDS). I DID KNOW HOW TO
DO IT BECAUSE I DO IT IN MY HOUSE. BUT WITH THIS MAT I DON`T LIKE TO DO
GYMNASTICS. BECAUSE IT IS REALLY THIN...
I LIKE TO DO THE ROLLIPOLY BUT IN THE WATER! BECAUSE IF YOU FALL, YOU DON`T
GET HEART.
I DON´T LIKE TO DO P.E. AT FIRST OUR IN THE MORNING, I`M NOT AWAKE!!
BY BLANCA.
TODAY, WE KEPT ON WITH THE ROLLIPOLY (BACKWARDS). I DID KNOW HOW TO
DO IT BECAUSE I DO IT IN MY HOUSE. BUT WITH THIS MAT I DON`T LIKE TO DO
GYMNASTICS. BECAUSE IT IS REALLY THIN...
I LIKE TO DO THE ROLLIPOLY BUT IN THE WATER! BECAUSE IF YOU FALL, YOU DON`T
GET HEART.
I DON´T LIKE TO DO P.E. AT FIRST OUR IN THE MORNING, I`M NOT AWAKE!!
BY BLANCA.
Hello Blanca,
ReplyDeleteNice text, but remember that when we are writing everything with capital on the internet, it means that we are shouting. A couple of things about your writing.
Line 1 > I knew how to ... (instead of I did know.., although it is not wrong if you are emphasizing the fact)
Line 2 > Try not to start with "But" after a full stop.
Line 5 > hurt (instead of heart)
Line 6 > I do not like to have P.E. in the first session in the morning ...
Good job Blanca, it is a nice text.