Day: Tuesday 17 of April 2012.
Last day we had a surprise...
The surprise was that we were with the d´waves. It´s was very funny my partner was Maria and we
help each other. I know a little and Maria to. Diego the teacher of d´waves explain us how to do it.
I learn a lot and also Diego gaves us a cart to win a free d´wave!!!!
By:Paula 6ºA
Last day we had a surprise...
The surprise was that we were with the d´waves. It´s was very funny my partner was Maria and we
help each other. I know a little and Maria to. Diego the teacher of d´waves explain us how to do it.
I learn a lot and also Diego gaves us a cart to win a free d´wave!!!!
By:Paula 6ºA
Hello Paula,
ReplyDeleteNice text, just a couple of things that you should change.
Line 1 > d´waves , with the waves. My partner was...
Line 2 > helped, I knew a little and María too, explained
Line 3 > gave
Line 4 > learnt a lot